Tuesday, August 15, 2017

chapter 5: Rope Dancers

Ts chapter is a little late.  Just couldn't get to it till today.  It set ups new conflict and intends to build the guilt and redemption themes.










Chapter Five

Guthrie was tired and hot and figured a few minutes of air conditioning wasn’t going to hurt anything, so on his way over to Doreen’s house, he stopped off at the diner for a large iced coffee.  After all, Jordan Crow wasn’t going anywhere.  As he waited for Jimmy Baston to prepare it, he watched a couple of minutes of the rerun of the ball game on the big screen TV.  Atlanta was being killed.  The score didn’t really matter,though; he just wished he had the time to kick back and watch a complete game; he didn’t think he’d seen one all the way through since he’d taken this job.
He used to be able to play pickup games with his buddies but becoming the chief put a stop to that; he no longer worked regular hours.  When you were on-duty all the time, you could schedule a ball game but something always interfered; there was always some emergency that canceled the game.
He took the coffee over to the crime scene with him.  Sipping from the styrofoam container, he walked over to Doreen Melson.   She looked small and weak, in some odd way insubstantial.  It stuck him that if he looked at her from the right angle, he might see through her.  Shivering, she wrapped her terrycloth robe closer around her.
He stood next to her, the styrofoam cup cold in his hand, watching the CSI men from the Georgia Bureau of Investigation go through their paces.  A red streak of false dawn broke across the horizon and when Guthrie noticed it, he recognized that in some abstract way it was very pretty but the sight didn't do a thing for his mood.  All he wanted was to go to bed.  Every muscle in his body ached  He was supposed to teach a martial arts class tonight; he figured he’d rope somebody else into doing it for him.  Maybe Kate could take it for him.
Jordan Crow's body still lay in the driveway, covered by a tarp.  His right hand, curled up like a claw, stuck out from the edge of the tarp. The body might as well have been a load of firewood for all the attention the investigators were paying to it.  A technician stepped over it to get to the garage door.
"Jesus, chief," Doreen said, over and over in a low, cracked voice.  "Jesus."
He could remember the day his fifth grade teacher had made her stand up in front of the class and introduced her as a new student, who had just moved here from Birmingham.  The moment stuck in his mind because even then he’d wondered why anybody would leave a big city like Birmingham to come to a graveyard like Channing.
Now, two, three times a week, she served him breakfast and coffee over at the diner.  They joked around together,  even flirted a little in the harmless way that old friends fell into.  She was a tall woman, almost as tall as he was and, if it hadn’t been for the toll the hard work she did had taken, she’d’ve been a beautiful woman.
"Take it easy, Doreen."  Even as he spoke, he was aware of how stupid his words were, but they were all he could come up with.  What the hell did you say when something like this happened?
She nodded, then shivered again, even though it was not cold.
The air was moist and in the distance, Guthrie could see patches of fog over the street.  Dew hung on the leaves of the shrubbery in front of Doreen’s house.  In an hour, all of the moisture would be burned off and the day would be, like yesterday, like tomorrow, hot and humid as hell.
A short man in his fifties, with close-cropped, thinning gray hair and a bald spot on the crown of his head walked slowly over to them.  He moved like a renaissance prince on his way to plan the war he intended to launch against a neighboring country.  He wore an expensive navy suit that fit him as though it had been custom tailored when he’d weighed fifteen pounds more than he did now.  A handkerchief was neatly folded in the breast pocket of the suit.  As he approached, the short man unbuttoned his jacket so that Guthrie and Doreen could see the holstered gun strapped to his belt.  A Georgia Bureau of Investigation badge was pinned to the holster.
"You Guthrie?"  He looked up at the chief and spoke as though the act of actually saying words out loud annoyed him, as if it were an action he'd have preferred not to perform.
"That's right."
The GBI man did not hold a hand out to be shaken.  "I'm Hank Price."
He said the name as though Guthrie was supposed to recognize it. Guthrie did.  Anyone in law enforcement in this state would have.  Price’s reputation walked half a mile in front of him.  When they talked about him — and they did, a lot — cops called him the Closer because he closed a higher percentage of his cases than any other agent.  For a while, Price had taken to referring to himself by that nickname in the press releases he sent out but then that TV show had come along and he didn’t want to be associated with some chick cop so he stopped using the name.  
Among cops, he was what every good detective wanted to be.  Among politicians, he was the name you shouted when a case threatened to embarrass you in the press.  If you were touched by a crime, you wanted Price on it because he would make it go away quicker than a cake at a birthday party.  Every once in a while, somebody complained about his methods, but Price worked in a business that admired results more than technique and he made honest busts.  If there was criticism, it never got near him.  
"Good to meet you,"  Guthrie said.
Guthrie had to look down to focus on his face.  Pulling himself erect, as though he were trying to make himself taller by an act of sheer will, the GBI man slipped his hands into his pockets and rocked back and forth on his heels.  Glancing around at the crime scene, Price indicated the covered corpse.  
"You know this guy?" he said.
"Sort of.  He moved away from here, I don't know, must have been right out of high school.  Never knew him real well.  He was just one of the guys you used to see around, you know?  We moved in different circles."
Price nodded.  "What's his story?"
"Guy’s a nobody here, goes up north and makes a bunch of money, wants to come back and show off.  Said he was looking into some business possibilities."
"Business, huh?  He close any deals?”
“None that I heard about.  And this is a small town.  I would have heard.”
“Be a good thing for you if he didn’t.”
“Why’s that?”
“You don’t know how he made his money?”
“No clue.”
“Your man here’s a big time defense attorney, connected all to hell.  Represented mafiosos, drug cartel people, you know what I’m talking about.”
“Makes his killing look a little different, doesn’t it?”
“You got a big drug problem in this county?”
“Not really.  A few boys cooking up a little meth out in the country but we got them behind bars.  A little weed out at the college.  You figure drugs are why he was hit?”
“No,” Price had an edge to his voice.  “He got blown all to hell by a shotgun because he wore brown shoes with a black suit.”
“You out to wiseass around or you want to get a fix on this situation?”
Price looked up at Guthrie, his eyes half closed, anger flashing in them.  “Let’s get one thing straight.  My getting a fix here’s got nothing nothing to do with you.”
“Man gets himself hit in my town, it’s got something to do with me.”
Price shrugged off Guthrie’s words.  “You said he’s here to show off?”
“He flat out told my brother he came here for payback more than anything else."
"He'll know better than to try that next time, won't he?"  He let the tiniest part of a grin break across his face.  It faded before it could fully form.  He pulled out a notebook and a stub of a pencil. “Who’s your brother?”
“Jonathan Guthrie.  He’s the pastor out at the Church of the Rock.”
“You know anybody round here that’d want to take old Crow out?"
"Couldn't tell you."
"Nobody hated him from the old days?"  
"Hell, I couldn’t say if anybody even remembered him.  He was just one more face in the crowd.  Nothing more than atmosphere."
Instead of shifting his face to look at Doreen, Price turned his whole body.  Guthrie saw significance in the movement.  Last summer, when his daughter had been here visiting, she’d been demonstrating that move for him, saying she’d learned it in an acting class.  It kept attention focused on you, she said, while you shifted your attention to someone else.  It projected authority, Abby declared.
"Turn your head and people look over where your eyes are going to focus," she'd said.  "Turn your whole body, they keep looking at you."
Now Price looked into Doreen Melton's eyes, his own eyes almost slits.  "Reckon he wasn't just atmosphere to you, was he, Miss..." he checked his notebook, "Melton."
Doreen recoiled.  Guthrie slid an arm around her shoulder, steadying her, drawing a quizzical look from Price.  Guthrie ignored the look.
"I only met him when he came back,"  Doreen said.  "I never knew him before."
"You didn't know him in the old days?"
"No, sir.  I might have seen him around school or something, but I didn't know him to speak to.  School’s real cliquish, you understand?  Jordan and me, we must not have hung with the same kids.”
"You got no problem hanging with him now, do you?"  Price said.  “A man you hardly knew?”
"No reason for that kind of talk, Price,” Guthrie said.
Price ignored him.  "So you're screwing a man you only knew a couple of days?"
Guthrie took a step forward.  "I told you, Price, there’s no reason for that.”
"Let's get this straight right up front, chief.  This is my investigation.  Mine.  You don't tell me how to run it.  You don’t tell me who I talk to or how I go about it. You take care of traffic tickets, I'll take care of murders."
"Your investigation, maybe, but my people.  My county.  You won’t be shutting me out and you won’t be treating  my people like you're treating Doreen.”
"Sheriff..."
“Back off.  I mean it.”
Price tried to stare him down but then sneered as if to say it wasn’t worth it. "She's a suspect, Guthrie."
"What are you suggesting?  She got out of bed, managed to sneak a shotgun out to the street before Crow could even leave the house and blew him away?  Then she got rid of the gun, ran back to the house and called my office?  Give me a fucking break."
"Like I said, Guthrie, my investigation.  I don't explain myself or my way of thinking.  I’ll give you this, though: ain’t it interesting somebody knew he was going to be here tonight?”
"Let me give you a little tip: no secrets here.  Town’s too small for that.  Everybody knows everything.  I guarantee you, a hundred people know what we’re doing right now."
Hank Price stared up at Guthrie for a long moment without blinking.  Guthrie wondered if that expression really intimidated people; it was obviously meant to.  When Price spoke, it was in a low voice.
"Line of authority's clear, Guthrie. You do your job and stay the hell out of the way while I do mine."
Guthrie moved a step closer, crowding Price, and looked down into the man's face.  "Man gets himself murdered in my town, I'm going to be looking into it.  You can damn well bet on that."
"You get in my way," Price said, "and I'll kick your ass till you bleed."
"No, you won't.”  He took a deep breath and when he spoke again, his voice was calmer, but it still had an edge to it.  “Look, Price, we ran through all the dialogue.  We know you’re a tough guy, I’m a tough guy. We done sparred around enough to show each other how tough we are.  What you say we just drop the act now?”
Before Price could answer, one of his detectives  called from the street, "Sir?  We need you over here."
"Stay the hell out of my way, Guthrie."  Price said as he turned to walk away.
"He thinks I was in on this?"  Doreen asked.
"He doesn’t know what to think. He's just covering all the bases,"  he said, although he knew damn well that Price was figuring she had a part in it.  If she was in the picture at all, Price would assume she was part of a conspiracy.  Guthrie removed his arm from her shoulder.  "What did you see out there, Doreen?"
"Like I told them, I heard a car start up and I said, 'he couldn't get his car out of the garage that fast' so I looked out of the doorway and didn't see anything at first.  Then I heard the shot.  A flash came from the car, it was parked up on the street where they're standing now, and Jordan screamed and there was another shot and, Jesus, it was terrible.  He went bouncing off the garage door and fell down.  God, the sound when he hit the driveway.  It was like dropping a big bag of dirt, you know?"
"You recognize the man in the car?"
"No.  It was one of those little tiny imports, you know, those cars that look like SUVs but they’re too small?  It looked like a foreign job.  But the driver?  Fact is, I never even saw him.  Just saw the barrel sticking out of the window."
She began shaking.  Guthrie took her arm and led her into the house.  Sitting her at the kitchen table, he poured her a cup of coffee.  At some point this morning, she'd made a fresh pot, so he threw away his styrofoam cup and took a mug out of her cabinet and filled it.
"It's going to be okay, Doreen."
As he watched her shudder at the sound of the investigators' voices outside, he wondered if anything was ever going to be okay again.  Deep inside, he was afraid that Jordan Crow's shooting had, like a new seasoning tossed into a stew, changed everything.
"How'd you meet Crow?"  he said.
"He came into the diner a few nights back.  He was real sweet, Bobby.  Sat there and talked to me till closing time."
"What'd you talk about?"
She watched the steam rise from her coffee cup.  "'Bout growing up around here.  We just chatted about the old days.  I didn't even know who he was, didn't know he was rich or anything.  He was just a regular guy.  I mean, he was too well dressed to be rom around here but still he came across as an ordinary guy. Pretty nice, in fact."
"So you went out with him?"
"Not till night before last.  He kept coming by the diner, just hanging out over a cup of coffee.  Night before last he asked me to go out with him after I closed up.  We had us a good time. I liked him.”
She looked at him, a challenge in her eyes, as if she expected him to make some comment about her morals.
"Doreen, the way these things go, you know we're probably going to have to talk again, don't you?"
"Sure."  She raised her arms helplessly.  "I don't know what I'm going to be able to tell you, though."
"Hank Price out there, he'll be having some talks with you, too."
"Oh, yeah, little banty rooster like that, he don't ever let up."
The little banty rooster looked up when Guthrie left, but he didn't bother to acknowledge the chief's departure.  Or his presence on earth for that matter, Guthrie thought.
Lord, he needed sleep.       
But he could tell he wasn't going to get any, not tonight and maybe not for a lot of other nights because if there was one thing he knew, it was that this wasn't a thing that had been done by a stranger.  As he drove back toward his house, he felt old, tucked away on the outskirts of things like a broken fishing knife somebody had meant to fix one day and never got around to.  

He felt old, out of his place and time for one simple reason: one of his friends and neighbors, one of the people he'd grown up with and probably chatted with every day, could be a murderer.

Sunday, August 6, 2017

Chapter Four --

For three nights now, ever he’d arrived in this town, two days after Crow had shown up here, Terence Glass had been tracking Jordan Crow as if he’d been prey, which, when you got right down to it, he was. 
It wasn’t really a thing he wanted to do, but the man who’d hired him wanted it done, so Glass figured it was easiest to just pull this action off and get the hell back to civilization.  It was like being back in the service: nothing to do but follow orders and look forward to your discharge  The whole thing was as simple as that.  Nothing personal; it was just how the deal went down.  When you got right down to it, he was trading Jordan Crow’s life for a whole bunch of money and money made a hell of a lot more difference to him than Crow ever would.
He had been hired to come down here to keep an eye on Crow while waiting for the signal to waste him, so the minute he’d had set foot in town, he started following the man around.  He’d even followed Crow to a revival service out at the Church of the Rock, though he’d hung back there, uncomfortable among the true believers.  It didn’t matter if he didn’t go into the tent.  The flaps were open; with his binoculars, he could see from his car, a Kia he’d stolen down in Daytona Beach.  He’d parked on the hill opposite the church grounds, where he had a good view.  
When the choir sang, Jordan Crow rocked back and forth to the rhythm, like a man determined to call attention to himself.  When the traveling evangelist that Jonathan Guthrie had brought in for the Revival, a black man, a fact that, considering how deep into the Bible Belt they were, surprised the hell out of him, started banging on a tambourine and calling on people to get right with God, Crow had hollered right back at him.  
A black man preaching to whites.  Sure, there was a scattering of dark faces in the crowd, but it was mostly white as the sheets they probably wore at other gatherings.  He hadn’t expected to see this sight down here in Channing.  This was the part of the country where the hate groups dragged black people behind pickup trucks, like they had that guy over in Mississippi, and here was a bunch of white folks listening to a black preacher.  
Nothing in Georgia made sense.
And Crow?  The way he carried on made even less sense.  He shouted and hollered, jumping up and down and shouting in agreement with the preacher.  Glass watched him, nodded his head and thought, not a bad idea, Crow; you better be getting right with God this very minute, because my bet is you don’t have many opportunities left.
The next morning, the man had called: “No reason to put it off any longer.”
“You want him dead?”
“As much as I wanted to get laid when I was sixteen.”
Those orders had been clear enough, so here he was in the Kia, with the shotgun by his side.  Sweat rolled down his cheek and he bumped his elbow against the Kia’s steering wheel as he reached to wipe it away.  He glanced once more at the shotgun.  It wasn’t a weapon he used often but, for some reason, he’d dug it out and cleaned it as soon as he’d gotten word that the man wanted Crow taken out.
It had been a gift from his stepfather.  
On his eleventh birthday, when the man had been married to his mother for three months, he'd come out of the bedroom with the thing all wrapped in newspaper.  Even though it had been wrapped, the package had so obviously been a weapon that the boy had been terrified.  When he opened it, Glass wondered what the hell was wrong with that freaking madman his mother had insisted on marrying.
Didn't matter.  The stepfather had only lasted another couple of months, just long enough to teach the boy to hunt.  He’d taken the boy out and taught him to shoot, saying, “I might not be around here forever and you got to be able to take care of yourself, boy.”  He stuck around long enough to make sure the boy became proficient with a shotgun, a rifle and a pistol and then he disappeared.  After the man his momma claimed she was going to spend the rest of her life with left town,  Glass thought about tracking him down and shooting him with the weapon he’d given him.    Whenever he thought about going after his stepfather and getting a little revenge for his mom, the sadness he remembered in the man’s eyes kept him from doing it.  Still, he sometimes thought he still might do it.
Last night Crow had slept over at Doreen Melson’s place, so as soon as he started driving out this way, the man in the Kia figured he was headed for Doreen’s again and he pulled up at her house just in time to see her closing the door behind herself and Crow.   Down at the diner, Doreen had served Glass coffee.  She was a pleasant looking woman, with a body that had held up pretty good but her crooked teeth bothered him.  She was about Crow's age so he wondered if the man had known her back in the old days when he’d lived here or if this was something new.  
Not that it made any difference.   
So he waited in front of Doreen Melson's house, the shotgun next to him.  As soon as Crow came out, he’d get his ticket punched.
#
Doreen Melson stood in the doorway in her bathrobe and said, "You don't have to go, you know."
"Doreen," Jordan Crow said, "it's four in the morning and you really wore me out.  I got to get myself a little sleep."
“Sleep here.”
“And let people see me slip out in the morning?  Doreen, these are your neighbors.  You got to keep on their good side.”
“They’ve seen men leave here before.”
“They haven’t seen me leave, though.  You know what these people think of me and you know what they’ll be saying about you if they find out we’ve been together.”
“It’s not right.”
“No, but it’s the way it is.  I’d better be going.” 
"I'll see you tonight?"
Crow checked himself in the full-length mirror that hung on the back of her door.  "I got to pull out tonight,  Babe.  I'll be busy getting packed up and then I got to drive back up to the airport.  Reckon this is it till I come this way again."  He planted a quick, dispassionate kiss on her cheek.  "See you next time, okay?"
“You’ll be coming back?”
“Told you, I got some things going on here.  Don’t take it like that; I mean business things.  I’ll be in and out of town a lot.”  
He laid his hand on her arm as he spoke and she didn’t feel any warmth in his touch.  Sure, he might be coming back to town, but it wouldn’t be to see her.  That she knew from his touch.  She’d been down this road too many times and knew better than to expect anything out of him.  If she was to tell herself the entire truth, Doreen had to admit she’d known what she was getting into when she invited him home.         
Pulling her robe closer, she walked with Crow out onto the porch and, with a hand lightly resting on the sleeve of his jacket, kissed him goodbye, a light careless peck on the cheek.  As he strolled to the garage, Doreen gave him a wave of the hand that had been holding him.  Then she turned and walked slowly back to the front door.  
#
"Go down to the Wal-Mart and buy yourself some pride," Veronica Wyeth said aloud, as she watched that poor little Doreen Melson walk back toward her door. The whole thing was so pathetic, the way the waitress stood there clutching her robe with one hand and looking real sad while she waved at Jordan Crow with the other.
When the man in the car shifted behind the wheel, his movement caught Veronica Wyeth’s eyes and even though she could clearly see what he was up to, his actions confused her because it was impossible, totally and completely inconceivable that he was doing exactly what she knew he was doing.  
"I am not seeing this," she said, even though she knew she was.  “If I wasn’t dying, I do believe this would kill me.”
When the driver raised the shotgun, eased the barrel out the window and leveled it on Jordan Crow, she quickly lowered her blinds and walking quickly, which gave her back pains.  She hurried as fast as she could back to the TV set, thinking about calling 911 but with a man with a gun right outside her house?, no, sir, you just forget it.
But try as she might, she couldn’t resist watching.  She had to see what was going on over there, so she hurried back to the window and peeked through the blinds.
#
Doreen Melson could not have said why she stopped, turned around and took one more long glance toward the garage.  The sound of a car engine starting up caused her to look up toward the road and from the corner of her eyes, she saw Jordan Crow turn also, and she saw his eyes widen just as she heard a loud quick blast.
Crow's face turned bright red as he screamed and jerked backwards, crashing against the garage door.  The blast was followed by another one and Crow's body cavorted as though he were a marionette being operated by a drunk.  As he slid slowly to the ground, leaving a bright slash of blood on the garage door, she couldn't be sure whether the scream she heard was his or hers.













Saturday, July 29, 2017

Third chapter: Rope Dancers

Here's chapter three, a short piece that characterize a witness and moves us closer to the first murder.

Chapter Three -- 

Veronica Wyeth wasn't much interested in the game.  It was a blowout.  Los Angeles was beating the Braves fourteen to two in the fifth inning and it seemed as though they’d been playing for three or four days already, so how could it possibly keep her attention?
Why would she want to stay involved with the game, anyway?  Ball games didn't make any difference to anybody.  Never did, although back when she was a girl, for most of her life, in fact, she lived and died baseball.  If the Braves were in the tank, so was she.  When they were winning, she was a fun lady to be around; back when the team had first moved to Atlanta, she’d gone to bed with a man she didn’t even know just because the Braves won a playoff game.  Her fortunes reflected the team’s.  
The bat Chipper Jones had signed for her still hung over her mantle but she didn't bother to look at it anymore.  The game just didn’t really do anything for anybody.  Just took up time and she didn’t have a whole lot of that left.
Wasn’t but one thing important now:  the fact that she was dying.  Virginia Wyeth only had a matter of months.  She was having a hard time getting used to the fact that this old world was going to have to keep on rolling along without her.  Most of her life, she’d been unable to imagine this planet without her on it.  She’d been, in her own mind, the absolute center of the universe.  Now, in a matter of minutes, her whole attitude had changed.  She’d learned that she was no more important than a hunk of dirt.  Not only had she learned it, she was right close to accepting it.
When you got right down to it, she’d had time enough to get used to the idea of a universe without her smack dab in the middle of it.  Even though that damn young fool, Doctor Draco, hadn’t been able to get around to telling her till Wednesday, she'd known it for months.  When the people in the doctor's office won't even look you in the eye, it's a plain fact that what they aren't saying is much more important than the words they’re using.  When the women on the receptionist’s desk begins treating you like an old friend, smiling and fawning over you and laughing at every little thing you say, it’s a sure sign you’re not meant to be around much longer.
Well, that was all right.  Only a damn fool thinks this life is going to last forever.  Only a fool wants it to last forever.  She had been telling herself for years that she was ready, but ever since she found out it was going to happen and it was a definite true fact that she was going to be taking her leave, she wondered if, deep down in her soul, she really was ready.
She thought she was.  Hopes she was.  The fact was she'd be finding out before much longer.  The room was cold.  She pulled a shawl over her bony shoulders.
She hauled herself over to the window.  The little foreign car was still there.  Somebody in it was smoking a cigarette.  She could see the flame in the dark and she wondered absently if the guy in the car was ready to meet his maker.  People  so rarely were.  Everybody thought they were going to live forever, the way she once had.

The poor mistaken bastards.

Sunday, July 23, 2017

Chapter Two --

Kate Brady wanted to ride along with him, claiming Bo Billingham was a handful that only a damn fool would try to bring in by himself, but Guthrie turned her down, saying, “Hell, Kate, I’ve known Bo all his life.  He’s not going to go hurting me.”
Brady was short and stocky.  She spent a lot of time in the gym and it showed.  When she moved muscles rippled beneath her denim shirt. Even though she was the Assistant Chief, she refused to wear a uniform, preferring jeans and her denim shirts, of which she appeared to have an unending supply.  Her reasoning was simply; if the chief didn’t wear uniforms, why should the assistant?
“Maybe he won’t hurt you when he’s sober,”  Brady stood in front of his desk, her hands on her hips.  “but he was drinking tonight.  Come on, chief,  you know it makes sense you let me ride along.  Just to be on the safe side, you understand?  A little backup isn’t out of the question.”
“You go on and get out on patrol.  I got this covered.”
#
As he drove out to Bo Billingham’s place, Guthrie hoped he’d called it right.  Kate Brady knew her stuff.  She’d been a homicide detective up in Raleigh until the police politics got to her.  When she mentioned to him at a conference that she was looking for a job where doing police work was more important than PR, he’d hired her on the spot.  Over the two years she’d been here, he’d come to trust her judgment without question, so if she said she ought to go along, he was going to listen.  But still, he had to trust his instincts and they told him to do it alone.  A show of force would just set Bo off and make him that much harder to deal with.  Make the wrong move on Bo Billingham and he was liable to drag a tree out of the ground and hit you with its roots.
As Guthrie got deeper into the country, it looked as though the rape of the land that Ponder County was undergoing had been fought to a stop.  A couple of miles back, he'd passed the last strip shopping center and now he watched pastures and forests roll by as he drove past them.  For a while it had seemed as if Ducky Levine had been out to develop every piece of pasture land still standing, but the economy had brought his plans to a crashing halt.  Still, the county had gone through some big time changes and, every time a developer drove through this area, his eyes lit up. Soon as the unemployment rate dropped a percentage point, the bulldozers would be grinding up the dirt again.  So far, though, this far out, Guthrie could see no sign of the explosion of shopping strips and developments and apartment complexes that were springing up all around the town of Channing.  
Everybody hated the development; all you had to do was walk through town and you’d hear talk about how something pure and beautiful had been lost forever.  Everybody hated it, everybody complained about it, yet everybody bought the new subdivision houses, shopped in the strip malls and ate in the chain restaurants, while they complained about how nobody went downtown anymore.  Folks around Channing were capable of surrounding themselves with the brand new, even while they bitched about how it was taking over their lives.  Guthrie sometimes felt they raised hypocrisy like a flag.
In most of Ponder County the smell of the new hung in the air like Spanish moss, but out here in the westernmost fringes of the county, you could still get away from it.  The land in this area was still as open and remote as it had been when he was growing up.
He took a deep breath.  He wasn’t on a pleasure drive.  If he’d had a choice, he wouldn’t choose  to go pick up Bo Billingham, but he could no more escape it than he could the morning alarm: His jurisdiction, his problem.  
Still, apprehensive as he was, the simple act of cruising down this dark road, feeling the night breeze washing through the car, seeing the headlights cut swaths through the darkness, warmed him like the blaze from the fireplace on a fall evening.
Guthrie told himself to enjoy being here while he could. It wouldn't be long till this land fell into somebody like Duckie Levine’s hands and, just like everybody else, he'd be complaining about its loss.  Just this morning, coming out of the diner, he'd overheard Lillian Lawrence talking to her nurse, Mabel Norris.  
"I just can't stand coming downtown anymore."  Lillian shoved her walker out in front of her and dragged herself up to it.  "Getting to where there ain't room on the sidewalk for a body.  All these new people that done moved in, how do they get their money?  What do they do?  How can they make themselves a living?  Ain’t been no work since the mills closed down."
"There's a bunch of new folks, all right,"  Mabel said.
"I swear, ain't enough room to kick a cat around here.  Ain't the town I was born in anymore, that's for sure."
Mabel held Lillian's arm while the old lady hauled herself into the car.  "Times change," she said.  "Towns grow.”
“They die is what they do.” Lillian Lawrence said.   “This town's ain’t changing, it’s dying.  I can’t recognize it anymore.  And you know the worst of it?  It ain't just there's too many people now.  What's bad is there's too many people and most of them's meaner'n hell."  She shook her head again.  "There's no joy left no more and I for one am pure sick of the way things are.  As far as I'm concerned, you can take what this town's come to be, tuck it in your back pocket and take it to hell with you."
As he clicked on the high beams, scannng for the dirt road that led up to Bo Billingham's house, Guthrie wondered what  Miss Lillian would say if she'd ever run into Bo the way he'd been earlier this evening, as drunk and mean as a man who'd just learned that everything he valued in life had been taken away from him without even an explanation.
Guthrie spotted the dirt road and slowed down for the turn.  As he left the highway, his headlights swept the trees that lined both sides of the makeshift road, casting shadows in the branches.  When he'd been a kid, out riding around at night with his dad, he'd always thought of those shadows as ghosts; he'd read that idea in some book or another and halfway believed it.  The chill that had run through his body when that idea crossed his mind had been delicious.  
He smiled at the memory, as he avoided the ruts that year in and year out traffic had made in the road.  Maybe he ought to turn off the bright lights, he thought, but he rejected the idea; it would be best if Bo knew he was coming.
#
Billingham's old Ford pickup was parked sideways in the front yard.  He stopped next to it, letting his lights shine on the house for a moment.  Taking a deep breath, he cut the engine and stepped out, making sure to slam the door loudly.
"Bo?" he called.  "It's Bobby Guthrie."
As he stepped up onto the porch, he felt old and tired. Maybe he'd been on the job too long.  Maybe it was time to be thinking about taking up a quieter line of work.
"Don't you be coming any closer, sheriff,"  Bo Billingham called from inside.
Why did everybody call him sheriff?  He was the chief of police, not the sheriff.  "Bo, you and me got to talk."
"I don't want to shoot you, sheriff, but you come after me and I won’t have no choice but to blow you away.  I got me a twelve guage in my hands.”  
Billingham was standing in the doorway, the shotgun cradled in his arms as he watched Guthrie.  He frowned, a movement of his face which seemed to take a lot of effort.  His head was the size of a watermelon and when he moved it, he appeared to think the motion through first.
“Bo, what the hell you talking about?  You aren’t going to shoot me.  We've known each other all our lives.  You and me, we don't talk to each other like that."
"You come to take me in."
"You put Tim Andrews in the hospital, Bo."
"They took him to the hospital?"
"What'd you expect?  You broke his jaw and three ribs.  He’s going to be hurting for a long time"
“Three ribs, huh?”
“That’s right.”
"I didn't do it on purpose.  He took a swing at me.  What was I supposed to do but hit him back?"
"If that's the way it went, won't a thing happen to you.  Look, let me come in, we'll talk about it."
"Aw, sheriff...."
"Come on now, Bo, you know we got to talk."  He'd learned long ago that you used a man's name as often as possible; hearing you calling him by name reminded him that the two of you had history together.  That made him less likely to attack.
"I'm telling you, chief...."
"I'm going to come on in, Bo.  We need to talk about what we're going to do about what you done to ol' Tim."
"All right, but you got to leave your gun outside."
"Jesus, Bo, what kind of man you think I am?   You think I'd come out here with a gun?  Friends don't do that to each other."
"You ain't carrying your gun?"
"Hell, no.  How many times I got to tell you, me and you are friends?"
Bo Billingham was as big as a squad car and had a faded tattoo of an anchor on his left forearm.  As he walked up to the house, Guthrie thought the man had no idea how threatening he looked and he wasn't bright enough to realize exactly how much damage he could do to another human being.  Normally, he was a nice enough guy, but let him get drunk and that mean mood would take him over and bones would get broken.  Billingham always felt terrible about it after it happened, but that didn't do anything for the victims. Guthrie nodded his head.  "Thanks for letting me in, Bo."
Billingham shook his head slowly from side to side.  "I'm telling you, sheriff, it wasn't my fault.  Andrews kept saying stuff to me.  Ask anybody.  Then he went and took a swing at me."  He cradled the shotgun in front of him.
"Bo, how come you to hold a shotgun on me?  Is that any way to treat a friend?"
"You're here to take me to jail, ain't you?  Well, I ain’t going.”
"I’m gonna be honest with you, Bo; you know you got to go back into town with me."
"Don't you come any closer, sheriff.  I ain't going nowhere."
"Fact is, Bo, maybe you had cause to hit Andrews, God knows he can be hard to get along with...."
"I did.”  He nodded his head jerkily, abruptly.  “He gave me cause, all right."
"Yeah, well, like I was saying, even if you did have cause, you still got to come back to town and answer for it.  Shooting me won't change that.  They'll just send somebody else out here.  If he can't get it done, they'll send two the time after that.  Then they'll send four.  See, that's the way they work, Bo, they'll just send one bunch of guys after another up here till somebody brings you in."  He shook his head.  "Might not be fair, but the truth of it is you don't have any choice about it.  You got to come back with me."
Billingham shook his head slowly, his eyes squinted, creases across his forehead.  "I told you, I ain't going."
"Bo, you got to."
"I don't want to."  He sounded like a small child.
"I know that.  Hell, I don’t want to take you, but neither one of us has a choice in this thing.  You got to go back and I got to drive you in."  He was careful to keep his voice soft, neutral.  "That’s all there is to it."
"No."
He waited until Billingham stopped shaking his head.  "I know you don't want to, but it’s not a matter of whether you want to or not.  You have to."
Billingham looked up at him excitedly, his eyes brightened by an idea.  "You go away and I'll come in tomorrow."
"Bo..."
"I'll come in tomorrow.  In the morning."
“What are you talking about?  You know I can’t just let you say you’ll come in on your own.”
“Damn it, sheriff, you ever know me to say I’ll do a thing and then not do it?”
“Matter of fact, no.  You always been a man of your word.”
“So I say I’ll be there, I’ll be there.”
"I got your word on that?"
"Sure do."
"You'll be in my office by ten in the morning?"
"Ten o'clock sharp.  I promise."
"I can trust you?  You're not going to let me down?"
"You can trust me, Sheriff.  I'll be there.  I promise."
Billingham was right; if he said he’d do a thing, it got done.  Slowly, ploddingly, without a drop of imagination, but it got done.  
"I'm going to trust you.  I’ll see you in the morning."
"Ten o'clock."  Bo nodded wildly.  "I'll be there."
“See you then.”

When he started up the car, he exhaled, surprised to feel the pounding of his heart.

Sunday, July 16, 2017

Rope Dancers. Chapter 1

I've decided to bring this blog back from the dead for a new project: I want to write a novel as blog entries. So, each Sunday I will post a new chapter of ROPE DANCERS, a crime novel that will explore the themes of guilt and forgiveness. The technical idea is to see if I can write a visual, cinematic novel, one that could be adapted to the screen with few to no changes. The model is John Steinbeck's play-novelettes, which he saw as novellas that could be performed without any alterations. Will this experiment work? I have no idea. |Is it worth trying? I believe so. Since this is a working progress, I welcome any feedback. Here then is chapter one of ROPE DANCERS:


                                                            ROPE DANCERS
                                                                   a novel by
                                                            Michael Scott Cain



                                    He who will dance on a rope will be alone,
                                    and I will gather a stronger mob of people
                                    who will say it was unbecoming.
                                                                              -- Blaise Pascal




 Chapter One

      If there was one thing Jordan Crow had become aware of during this past week, it was that the whole town of Channing felt he should never have come back. The way they felt was that maybe he had gone off and become a big man up north, maybe Jordan Crow had talked folks into believing he was some kind of powerful man, a guy to be admired and feared, a leader of men, a person of influence. Maybe in some other places, he'd gone and built himself a big reputation and made a ton of money, but down here, folks still thought he was one small time son of a bitch. So when he came back here just being himself, the locals acted like he was lording it over them and carrying on like he really was the person he pretended to be, well, maybe some folks were willing to believe he was all that and a basket of fries, but here in Channing, people weren't that easy to fool. Not by Jordan Crow, anyway.
      Channing people remembered who he was; they had grown up with Jordan Crow and had put up with him long enough to know that this particular leopard wasn't about to change his spots. The presence of this particular leopard bothered them so much that if they had known that right now, as Crow drove past the park, the man who followed along behind Crow in his Kia had in mind doing something about Jordan Crow, they would not have minded. They would have just nodded their heads and said, “Good. ‘Bout time, too.”
       Maybe what the driver of the Kia had in mind wasn’t quite appropriate, you wouldn't catch any of them arguing that Crow didn't have it coming. # Terence Glass, the man driving the Kia, wore jeans, an Allman Brothers tee-shirt and a windbreaker. He had on a Braves cap and while he knew he was never going to be mistaken for a local, at least he wasn’t a sore thumb. He stayed a quarter of a mile behind Jordan Crow as they drove through town, driving lazily, his mind on things that couldn’t be seen with the naked eye, things like revenge and justice and morality. He speculated about how people insisted on trying to be bigger, more important than other people; wondered how come people who hit it big and got themselves rich thought they were better than ordinary folks, no matter what they’d done or who they hurt to get all that money in the first place.
        He had a lot of money himself -- if he started burning dollar bills right now, it would take him a decade or so to get rid of all the cash he had. Still, he didn’t think he was better than anyone else. He was a man like any other man. And if Jordan Crow had continued to think of himself that way, he might not have Terence Glass on his trail right now. And he told himself that what was going to happen now was a matter of simple justice and that anybody with a brain knew he was morally obligated to carry out this particular act.
        Sometimes he wished he could tell people about why he was coming for Crow, take out an ad in the papers maybe, or make a public service announcement for TV. Somehow, he thought, when it happens, people will know why, even if he didn’t tell them.

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      The night was hot. Even though it was September and back up north the summer heat had already broken, the air here was hot enough and humid enough to make Crow feel like he was sitting in a steam bath after a workout. He cranked the air conditioner all the way up and drove quickly, as if road speed contributed to coolness.
      Being back in Channing was more complicated than Crow had figured it was going to be. He'd been looking for the triumphant homecoming. He'd had visions of being made welcome by the people who'd treated him so badly when he'd been growing up here. The way they’d treated him still got to him. They still made him feel like a box of rusty nails, left behind when the construction job was done.
       Crow had been surprised to discover that he still hurt from their treatment; until he came back, he’d figured it had all faded away like last week’s dream. Now he had to face the fact that even after all these years, after everything he'd accomplished, to the people he’d grown up with, he was still and forever would be nothing more than mud on the soles of their shoes. He'd been gone for more than ten years, more than enough time for everybody to forgive and forget, but the town still treated him like an outsider. They just weren’t about to warm up to him, didn't trust him any more than they would a liberal president. Crow didn't know how to feel about that.
       Physically, Channing had changed. He had a hard time recognizing it as the place where he'd grown up. His hotel was out by the highway, maybe ten miles west of town. When he’d lived here, there had been nothing around this area but pasture land and a drive-in theater. Now the drive-in had been so thoroughly demolished he couldn’t quite remember exactly where it had even stood. In its place were sprawling subdivisions, hundreds of vinyl-sided houses with formstone fronts that were supposed to fool a person into thinking they were brick. The houses all looked the same and were too close together, crowded up against each other like scared kids.
       The subdivisions had names like Rambling Heights and Country Corners and the houses stood in bare open areas that looked like middle east war zones; all of the trees, in fact, all of the vegetation, had been stripped when they were built. The area looked even more desolate because, due to the spring and summer drought, the sodded lawns hadn't grown in. Every couple of miles, he'd drive past a strip mall, made from the same cheap materials as the houses. Each of the strip malls held the same assortment of Piggly-Wigglys, Seven-Elevens, Eye Care Centers, dollar stores and Hardware Fairs.                   Every once in a while, you could see something unusual, like a hypnosis center, that seemed to have been dropped into the wrong place.  When Crow first saw the hypnosis center, it reminded him of a puzzle piece that had been broken off at the corners and shoved into a slot where it didn't fit.
       He couldn’t get over the changes. When he'd lived here, the only buildings out this way had been the ramshackle falling-down cottages that the white people called slave shacks, even though the odds of them having been erected during the slavery era were pretty remote. Still, since migrant workers had lived in them during the old days, the name fit. As he sped past these buildings, Jordan Crow couldn't help but remember how Channing hadn’t been a good place for a man with a brain and some ambition to grow up.

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      Now, on his last night back, he recognized that he was still looking for respect. He wanted all of these people who'd treated him so miserably, who'd ignored him, who had never been willing to take a single minute out of their lives to make time for him, well, he wanted them to take him seriously. He wanted, no, he needed them to be able to, if they couldn't find kindness in their hearts for him, at the very least they could show a little respect and fear. Because here was the thing; he was about to turn their town upside down. In just a couple of years, he was going to own this place. They might as well change the name of Channing to Crow right now because it was all going to be be his.

                                                                                     #

       He slowed as he drove down Main Street. The downtown Channing was the same as it had always been. Small and quiet, remote and forgotten, like a pocket watch lost so long ago that no one could remember ever owning it, Channing just sat there, a terminally ill town waiting to die. All of the growth was outside of town. Channing might be falling into nothingness, but Ponder County was a Gold Rush. For the past ten years or so, Atlanta had been spreading out like ripples from a wave, sweeping up every piece of land before it. Places that just a few years ago were covered with farms were now covered with townhouse communities. Damn near the whole state of Georgia was becoming one big suburb. Now, it was Ponder County’s turn. It was caught up in change and growth and in just a few years it was going to be unrecognizable. And Jordan Crow was going to be right in the middle of it, driving the change, shaping Ponder County into what he wanted it to be and raking in money like some fairy tale character whose garden grew gold coins.
       Traveling Main Street, he wondered how long it would take for the change to hit downtown Channing. Main Street was less than a mile long, with the town square located right at the halfway point. The square was made up of a bunch of stores and offices that formed a horseshoe around Robert E. Lee Park, which was where all the townspeople gathered. In any weather, you could find the old guys playing dominos at one end, while at the other, the young mothers sat on benches and passed the time as their kids ran and played and climbed on the monkey bars.
       When he’d lived here, the black folks had concentrated themselves down at the south end of the park as though they’d been shoved behind one of those electronic fences that held dogs in, but now, he noticed, they spread out over the whole park, like they would if they lived up north. The park anchored the town the way a big box store anchored a mall. When you drove down the main drag, you saw it looming in front of you from blocks away, growing bigger as you neared it. Main Street sloped around it in a long, slow graded curve and then headed out again into the miles and miles of new suburbs and strip malls.
        Three blocks beyond the park, he turned left and cruised down a dark street into a declining section of working class houses, still unaware of the Kia behind him. This had been a pretty good neighborhood when he’d been here, one that he’d always felt self-conscious walking through, but these days as soon as you entered it, you could see that it had known better days. It had gotten shabby; too many houses had chipped paint and untended lawns. Down the block, he could see a rusted out Chevy up on blocks. It looked like it had been there forever. He drove slowly for three blocks, past the Goodwill store that had been an electronics repair shop during his days here, and pulled into a driveway. It was late; no other cars drove the street.
       The house he'd arrived at was the only one with lights on. Before he had a chance to get out of the car, the front door opened. In the doorway, Doreen Melson flashed him a smile that was shadowed by the back light which also showed the curve of her legs under her nightgown. When he reached her, she caressed his cheek and said, "Why don't you put the car in the garage? We don't want to be worried about the neighbors, do we?"
       Now it was his turn to smile.

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      Veronica Wyeth couldn't sleep. When you got to be her age, it was hard to get to asleep and even harder to stay that way. You'd no sooner drop off than you'd spring awake by some noise that you wouldn't have even noticed back when you were, say, ten years younger. Most of the time, she would hear something and her eyes would spring wide open, her heart thumping like a hummingbird's and she’d lie in her quiet bed in the still room on her back, looking up at her ceiling, feeling the nerves in her body racing like Nascar cars. She felt that way now and knew she was going to be awake for hours. That always happened. A person her age, well, once you woke them up, that was it; there was no going back to sleep.
       Slowly, she reached down and used her hands to drop her legs over the edge of the bed, and pulled herself up to a sitting position. She moved slowly so she wouldn't get dizzy After her head cleared, Veronica Wyeth stood, exhaled and hauled herself over to her chair. Again, she moved slowly. She'd been getting dizzy spells the past few months and she was afraid of them, since they were sure signs she was failing. She was going to be up for hours, so she did what she always did when this happened: flip on the TV and see if she could find a late starting ball game on ESPN. The Braves were out in California. If ESPN wasn’t carrying the game, maybe TBS was.
       As she searched for the remote, she noticed movement outside and glanced out the window. Across the street, Doreen Meltzer's garage door was closing and a man was walking into her house. It was dark over there, the bulb above the garage door wasn’t bright enough to shed much light, but she could see that Doreen Melton had gone out and found herself a little plaything to warm up her bed.          At one time, not long ago in fact, she would have found that shocking. She would have disapproved.     Well, now she didn’t mind so much.
      Veronica Wyeth was a grown woman, Doreen Melson was a grown woman, and who the hell cared what grown women did with their lives? Nothing like a case of cancer to change your thinking. Since Dr, Draco told her she was dying, a lot of stuff she used to think was so important didn’t mean a thing to her anymore. Facing your own death had a way of putting things into perspective. Veronica Wyeth knew what it was to spend a night in a bed by herself and she didn't wish it on anybody. If Doreen could find herself a man to warm that bed up, well, that was just fine. She only wished Doreen could find another one for her.
       As she was about to turn away from the window, a second car, one of those little foreign jobs that looked like a baby jeep, one of those, what did they call them? SUVs, that was it, one of those SUVs, pulled up in front of Doreen's house. The driver parked next to the big oak tree so that he was in the shadows. Nobody got out of the car. Now that was strange, she thought, as she turned on the TV. But like everything else going on over there, it was none of her business. And the years had taught her not to get involved in stuff that was none of her business.

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      On a night as hot as this, Terence Glass felt he ought to be out at Fat Sam’s Roadhouse, tossing back a few beers and chewing on some ribs in the air conditioning. He liked Fat Sam’s. In fact, discovering that place had made this trip tolerable. There was always some action there because the two counties that bordered Ponder County were still dry and Fat Sam’s had been built to be convenient to all three counties. So there was always a crowd there; lots of pretty young ladies from all over South Georgia. He checked his watch; maybe there’d be time to drop by there when he finished up here.
       He glanced at the shotgun propped against the passenger’s door. Part of him that didn’t want to do this. He had nothing against Jordan Crow but he’d been hired to do a job and he wasn’t about to go against the people who threw money at him. He touched the barrel of the gun as if to make sure it was really there. No matter what the weather, a shotgun’s barrel never heated up. Right now it felt as cool as air conditioning, which in this car wasn’t working and that irritated him. How the agency could have turned loose a car whose air conditioning was going to break down within an hour of his taking it off of the lot was beyond him. He’d thought about taking it back, getting another one, but the airport was so far away and he intended to be out of this town really soon, so it just wasn’t worth the effort.
         Maybe it was fall on the calendar but it was still hot as hell, with humidity that brought a sweat as soon as you stepped out the door and he was going to be sitting here for God knows how long. Maybe he ought to just go on back to the hotel. No, he couldn’t do that. He had a job to do. A mission, if you wanted to use that kind of language. He lifted his Atlanta Braves cap and wiped the sweat from his forehead with his forearm. For just a moment, he wondered exactly how long he'd been stroking the barrel of the shotgun.